Thursday, February 21, 2008

Soccer is Fun
By Steve

Have you ever played soccer? Have you ever wanted to play another sport? I have played soccer but I have never wanted to change sports. Soccer is fun.

The first reason soccer is fun is because you can make a goal. You can score a point. We passed the ball and we made a goal.

Also you play with friends. Soccer needs teamwork. You can make new friends when you play soccer.

Another reason is you can play soccer outside. It’s fun to play soccer outside because you get some sunlight. You get fresh air. You can exercise.

Some people disagree with me that soccer is fun because you run so much. You can score a point by thinking in your hear but my opinion is it’s better to play soccer because you can get exercise. When I grow up I’m going to be a good player.

2 comments:

Nicole said...

Excellent, Steve! I can tell that you really like soccer and I think you will make people agree with you when they read your essay:)

Sincerely,
Ms. Walters

Nicole said...

I liked your essay, Steve. Now I am going to play soccer at recess everyday.

Sincerely,
Edwin A.